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As I can put a critique on it U will c:.. I love the style of your hair and eyes.. And I think the background is really awesome c: The expression is clear and the pose is nice but i suggest you to improve on, for example, the hands whch you could do a lil bigger and same for the feet, you also could work a bit on shading as it should be a little more clear and you should add a little bit of light on it.. Anyway I like the lineart and the proportions seem fine c: good job! And hope you will improve more to be even a better artist c:
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coconut-s Featured By Owner Dec 26, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
Thank you, I'll try improve >u<
I knew there was something wrong with the hands xDDD
But thank you again for the advice, I really appreciate it :'DD
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Flame-of-Icarus Featured By Owner Dec 26, 2012  Student Digital Artist
Well, she seems a chibi x3 but i like it very much ovo
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